Organization and Ideas
1. She values the flag because the flag represents the country that can't be trampled. So I think she is patriotic. In addition, she is also a careful and patient person that each time after a viewer left, she would take off her jacket and wipe the flag clean.
2. I think most of the conflicts are between the United States and China. First, the United States is full of freedom, while China is repressive and less freedom. The second one is the antagonism between the USA and China. The writer was taught how to resist the Americans, not only the skills to kill Americans but also remoulded people's ideology. And then, the third conflict is between Min and China because she had denounced the Communist China.
3. I think the most important conflict is Min and China. Because she denounced the Communist China, she left China and went to the USA for seeking the shelter. When she lived in America, she realized how good to enjoy the freedom so that this essay could be developed.
4. The essay's thesis is " Freedom is indispensable and we should treasure it." I think she not only learn the feeling of being free but also have to cherish it because it has not come easily.
5. In paragraph 4, I think Min's tone is pretty emotional and agitated. Because she said " I was emotional because if it were not for America I would not have been alive today." I can feel that when she wrote this sentence, she was very grateful to America and not wanted to see anyone burnt the symbol of America--flag. In paragraph 5, I think Min's tone is realistic because it just describes what she had experienced in China.
No comments:
Post a Comment